I submit to you
My poetic Diary...
Words that float from within..
Yet nothing has certainty....
It is about taking it one day at a time...
I’m touched by life and circumstances..
And I begin over here ....
2004, Nasra Al Adawi
posted by Nasra AL Adawi at 2:45 PM
Thank you for your kind comments on my blog. Where do you stay in Oman. We were to come to Muscat last November but could not due to some problems at home.
I live in Muscat ...thank you for visiting my blog
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Maybe you could write privately to me - what do you do in Oman? are you married? Keep in touch.
Very nice and succinct. But, perhaps, a hyphen would be appropriate between "pursuit" and "touching." It would a distinct break point and a bit of drama to this nice piece. (Just a suggestion).
I really like this one. It is currently what I think about mostly :)
sstalim Thank for reading my poem..Well I can write you a poem..but I really have to know to write about you...LOLAnonymous Poet I think you are right I will try to put a comma..Thanks for your help... its nice to get help from a fellow poetHopeI love your blog and Im honoured that I liked my poem
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