Fly Pursuit
nasra al adawi 2005
posted by iamnasra at 2:45 PM
I submit to you My poetic Diary... Words that float from within.. Yet nothing has certainty.... It is about taking it one day at a time... I’m touched by life and circumstances.. And I begin over here .... 2004, Nasra Al Adawi
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Thank you for your kind comments on my blog. Where do you stay in Oman. We were to come to Muscat last November but could not due to some problems at home.
I live in Muscat ...thank you for visiting my blog
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Maybe you could write privately to me - what do you do in Oman? are you married? Keep in touch.
Very nice and succinct. But, perhaps, a hyphen would be appropriate between "pursuit" and "touching." It would a distinct break point and a bit of drama to this nice piece. (Just a suggestion).
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I really like this one. It is currently what I think about mostly :)
sstalim
Thank for reading my poem..Well I can write you a poem..but I really have to know to write about you...LOL
Anonymous Poet
I think you are right I will try to put a comma..Thanks for your help... its nice to get help from a fellow poet
Hope
I love your blog and Im honoured that I liked my poem
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