Sunday, May 15, 2005

Fly Pursuit


nasra al adawi 2005

8 Comments:

Blogger Swati said...

Thank you for your kind comments on my blog. Where do you stay in Oman. We were to come to Muscat last November but could not due to some problems at home.

3:04 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

I live in Muscat ...thank you for visiting my blog

7:51 AM  
Blogger SatishTalim said...

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4:57 PM  
Anonymous sstalim said...

Maybe you could write privately to me - what do you do in Oman? are you married? Keep in touch.

4:57 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Very nice and succinct. But, perhaps, a hyphen would be appropriate between "pursuit" and "touching." It would a distinct break point and a bit of drama to this nice piece. (Just a suggestion).

7:47 PM  
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7:47 PM  
Blogger Hope said...

I really like this one. It is currently what I think about mostly :)

12:43 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

sstalim
Thank for reading my poem..Well I can write you a poem..but I really have to know to write about you...LOL

Anonymous Poet
I think you are right I will try to put a comma..Thanks for your help... its nice to get help from a fellow poet

Hope

I love your blog and Im honoured that I liked my poem

7:34 AM  

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