Wednesday, March 14, 2007

~ How Poetry Feels ~


My Sword
Originally uploaded by
curious_spider.


Don’t rush me

When I don’t feel

To be rushed at all

Let me pour

All in ease

An airy breeze

I’m a song

Within the wind

Silence within stillness

Poetry of my own

Words unuttered

Air untouched

Within core of my soul

I’m poetry of my own

© 2007, Nasra Al Adawi


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20 Comments:

Blogger Jay said...

That's beautiful, and relateable.

4:50 AM  
Blogger Don Iannone said...

Indeed no need to rush. A very nice one, Nasra. Hope you are well.

4:59 AM  
Blogger magiceye said...

........lovely..........

6:38 AM  
Blogger Cocaine Jesus said...

yes, i agree with that. all humans are poetry. works of art and unique.
hope you are well
x

8:43 AM  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

"Within core of my soul

I’m poetry of my own"


I love these lines...

9:09 AM  
Blogger david santos said...

Hello! Very, very nice, thank you
nice day

8:57 AM  
Blogger sensation said...

Marvelous! Simple yet very expressive! :)

3:18 AM  
Anonymous gel(emerald eyes) said...

Waving hi ~~ Nasra~~
wise sentiment
gently written

loved this part of your poem:
"I’m a song

Within the wind

Silence within stillness"

10:35 PM  
Blogger Amalendu said...

true.. and lovely...I share your feelings....

10:43 PM  
Blogger Rauf said...

Etire nature is a poem Nasra, harsh and beautiful

3:33 AM  
Blogger Kai C. said...

simply beautiful!

11:26 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like this one! Right to the point.

10:44 PM  
Blogger "Angeldust" said...

Hello......

I would swear I left a comment!

Well, I know how it feels.

Love and JOy

12:19 AM  
Blogger "Angeldust" said...

PS.;
Before Rauf was around for sure

12:20 AM  
Blogger Mimi Lenox said...

Congratulations, Nasra. You're won and award and tagged for a meme.
Please see this post today....http://mimiwrites.blogspot.com/2007/03/thinking-award-whoda-thunk-it.html

Peace,
Mimi

7:05 AM  
Blogger trinitystar said...

Nasra ... beautiful poem ... calming and the stillness comes across so well.
hugs for you :o)

7:20 AM  
Blogger Paul said...

Seems like the only way to write to me.

5:51 PM  
Blogger EATING POETRY said...

Love the simplicity, the layout of the words. You are poetry indeed!

1:26 AM  
Blogger M. Shahin said...

The last lines says it all. One of my favorites of your poems. We are indeed all of us poetry! That should make us appreciate ourselves and each other even more :)

3:11 PM  
Blogger [a} said...

It's true, that's exactly how it feels when writing poetry! Also, I think when writing we connect with the great truth: that there's hope, light, and beauty...that this entire life is in fact one great sublime poem.

4:09 AM  

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