Monday, January 22, 2007

Seeking


Butterfly and cocoon
Originally uploaded by krmuir.

As it falls
Droplet thoughts
In to the shell
Maybe its empty
Does not even hold
A tiny pearl
My shell holds
Fogs of thoughts
Lingering into my brain
I nip into its soul
To distill a poetry of my own
Then to unfurl poetic pages
Glossing through darkness
A butterfly merging
Out of cocoon of darkness
Releasing poetry
Just as butterfly
Unlocking her wings
About to take poetic flight
Then floating into sky
Seeking
Perhaps what is known
To me and you
Life seeking

Copyright Nasra Al Adwi 2007

The photo belongs to krmuir.from flickr.com

20 Comments:

Blogger Poetry by Kai said...

awww its beautiful...
i luv it
i luv butterflies

hugs

7:01 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Iamnasra!
I enjoyed this poem.
Wonerful and interesting blog.
All the best to you!

7:37 PM  
Blogger samuru999 said...

Lovely!
I love this poem!

Margie

8:20 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Amazing!



GBU
Arti

3:51 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

........beautiful..........

5:55 AM  
Anonymous LyricHut said...

Very beautiful and touching Nasra. Keep em' coming!

7:46 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

your shell is anything but empty and this is another pearl.

p.s.
great photo!

11:29 AM  
Anonymous zingtrial said...

I love this poem.
Beautiful.
Wish you well my friend.

1:25 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

"Fogs of thoughts
Lingering into my brain
I nip into its soul
To distill a poetry of my own"

Lovely :)

12:42 AM  
Blogger gulnaz said...

you have expressed so beautifully the process of writing. great!!

1:46 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

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2:17 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Thanks all for your comments, I was so not upset but somehow down with myself as it was days that I did not touch my keyboard to write poetry. SO I was nibing into my brain to find inspiration and I told myself I dont think my brain has any poetry inside, I was somehow sure that its empty and that is when this poem came about

2:18 AM  
Blogger Don Iannone said...

Great one, Nasra! Enjoyed this poem. Seems many people today are writing poems about our mental machinations.

4:16 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

life seeking.

6:05 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

!!..Awesome beautiful poem...!!

11:28 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

ty
warm hugs

8:10 AM  
Blogger floots said...

butterflies
as life and metaphor
never fail to amaze me
thank you

4:07 AM  
Blogger Nabeel said...

I am not sure what kinda poem is it .. i mean .. what style that is .. because the traditional poetry rhymes. this is more like you are telling your thoughts ..

5:10 PM  
Blogger Neon said...

fogs of thoughts
lingering into my brain
echoes of a future
that could be

3:09 PM  
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