~ Done With You ~
I'm done fighting you
You are the wind
That insists entering my door
So I shut all the openings
Closing my way
Leaving you on your own
It's all I can do
Your anger twists within you
Hot and cold
Building your furious soul
Finally a twister of them all
But this is just a starting point
Fueled in anger
To strength your twisting mood
I wonder if there is an end to you
Touch of your hands
Simply destruction
To every beautiful creation
I thought it’s a necessity to fight you
Fuming my soul in anger
To just pinch you so you can taste my pain
You left me all troubled
But I suddenly realized
That I'm getting twisted into your game
I'm done with you
But remember
In all this, your turn will reach
Fate will rotate on you
The torture will cease in my mind
The marks will fade
I have taken a choice
I'm not taking your road
Copyright 2008 Nasra Al Adawi
Photo by ducati_rog on flickr.com
Labels: Nasra Al Adawi, Omani Poet, therapy
posted by iamnasra at 1:15 PM
15 Comments:
So emotional,
you painted it distinctly.
And beautiful!
God bless you Nasra,
Love and Hugs!
Brilliant expression!
Sometimes you just have to give up on it. Go your own way and hope for better--you will find new loves.
Beautiful expression of independence and spirit.
Beautiful..
Thanks for sharing dear :)
Take care
such an emotional ride .. enjoyed it
Alok
Lovely Nasra.
By the way: http://www.flickr.com/photos/don-iannone/
Blessings!
Powerful! I love the last line.
Beautiful.Well crafted.
keep on writing.
Best wishes....
do visit MAN IN PAINTING
stunningly superb
The feeling reminds me of an Eagles song - "Already Gone."
a lovely extended metaphor using the wind in all its guises.
very, very powerful!!
Thanks for sharing well done...Mary
Such immense power in your words nasra..
how are you dear friend?
I hav shifted cities last year and have been a lazy blogger :)
just amazing...
whenever we choose, we lose part of the agony....
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