Tuesday, May 27, 2008

~ Done With You ~


twister
Originally uploaded by ducati_rog

I'm done fighting you
You are the wind
That insists entering my door
So I shut all the openings
Closing my way
Leaving you on your own
It's all I can do
Your anger twists within you
Hot and cold
Building your furious soul
Finally a twister of them all
But this is just a starting point
Fueled in anger
To strength your twisting mood
I wonder if there is an end to you
Touch of your hands
Simply destruction
To every beautiful creation
I thought it’s a necessity to fight you
Fuming my soul in anger
To just pinch you so you can taste my pain
You left me all troubled
But I suddenly realized
That I'm getting twisted into your game
I'm done with you
But remember
In all this, your turn will reach
Fate will rotate on you
The torture will cease in my mind
The marks will fade
I have taken a choice
I'm not taking your road

Copyright 2008 Nasra Al Adawi


Photo by ducati_rog on flickr.com

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15 Comments:

Blogger krystyna said...

So emotional,
you painted it distinctly.
And beautiful!

God bless you Nasra,
Love and Hugs!

2:40 PM  
Blogger magiceye said...

Brilliant expression!

2:14 AM  
Blogger goatman said...

Sometimes you just have to give up on it. Go your own way and hope for better--you will find new loves.
Beautiful expression of independence and spirit.

12:03 PM  
Blogger samrina said...

Beautiful..

Thanks for sharing dear :)

Take care

6:19 AM  
Blogger Alok said...

such an emotional ride .. enjoyed it


Alok

1:42 AM  
Blogger Don Iannone said...

Lovely Nasra.

By the way: http://www.flickr.com/photos/don-iannone/

Blessings!

8:06 AM  
Blogger EATING POETRY said...

Powerful! I love the last line.

4:53 PM  
Blogger MAN IN PAINTING said...

Beautiful.Well crafted.
keep on writing.
Best wishes....
do visit MAN IN PAINTING

7:24 AM  
Blogger meetu said...

stunningly superb

1:10 PM  
Anonymous paul maurice martin said...

The feeling reminds me of an Eagles song - "Already Gone."

5:12 PM  
Blogger Ackworth Born said...

a lovely extended metaphor using the wind in all its guises.

12:44 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very, very powerful!!

9:52 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

Thanks for sharing well done...Mary

6:57 PM  
Blogger Jyotsna said...

Such immense power in your words nasra..
how are you dear friend?
I hav shifted cities last year and have been a lazy blogger :)

9:02 AM  
Blogger human being said...

just amazing...
whenever we choose, we lose part of the agony....

1:50 PM  

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