Soul Breeze
Write on my soul
Write me poetry of my own
Without being written or engraved
Precious scripture
Enchanted with love
Blowing so gently in a breeze
Taking a journey beyond the earthly skies
Dancing with ease
Far way from this corner of earth
Mesmerizing my soul
Finding a home
A galaxy of skies
Without being in cubical walls
Colorless, I surrendered my race
Know that as you write over my soul
I’m freed at last from my tangible world
A form of nonexistence may seem
Gladly had give in the status of being a man
Just to remain a tiny breeze of a soul
Should I wish, I’m free to fly the galaxy skies
copyright 2005 nasra al adawi
posted by iamnasra at 1:57 PM
12 Comments:
This is lovely
Thanks Sue
Its been long time (it feels I did not write for years) and it was only 10 days...Maybe I did not loose my poetic touch LOL
Love the way you have begun this poem,
"Write on my soul
Write me poetry of my own
Without being written or engraved
Precious scripture
Enchanted with love
Blowing so gently in a breeze"
Very rhythmic and like a gentle breeze.
Thanks for dropping by my blog and for your comment. Look forward to seeing you back!
great poem. very fluid "a tiny breeze of a soul"
very beautiful words :)
"I’m free to fly the galaxy skies "
I loved this poem Nasra ..
There's something about it that touched me! Maybe the spirit of the poem! :)
makes me imagine the desert sunsets, the skies and the breeze.
"Write on my soul
Write me poetry of my own"
"Colorless, I surrendered my race"
exquisite! you combine strength and loveliness in this one! :)
look like home!
Hey-Saw that you liked poetry so thought would invite you take a look at mine, would love to know what you think! Hope alls well, Jeremy http://www.jemidgimi.blogspot.com
P/s read through yours and thought was really cool!
A lovely poem. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem.
Im so touched by the comments over here..never thought I will get someone to read my poem ...
Thats good one. I am not a poet and from couple of my blogger frenz, i always wonder how people can combine words together, and make it a poem.
Definately you haven't lost it
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