Sunday, June 26, 2005

Soul Breeze



Write on my soul
Write me poetry of my own
Without being written or engraved
Precious scripture
Enchanted with love
Blowing so gently in a breeze
Taking a journey beyond the earthly skies
Dancing with ease
Far way from this corner of earth
Mesmerizing my soul
Finding a home
A galaxy of skies
Without being in cubical walls
Colorless, I surrendered my race
Know that as you write over my soul
I’m freed at last from my tangible world
A form of nonexistence may seem
Gladly had give in the status of being a man
Just to remain a tiny breeze of a soul
Should I wish, I’m free to fly the galaxy skies

copyright 2005 nasra al adawi



12 Comments:

Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

This is lovely

11:28 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Thanks Sue
Its been long time (it feels I did not write for years) and it was only 10 days...Maybe I did not loose my poetic touch LOL

4:44 AM  
Blogger . : A : . said...

Love the way you have begun this poem,

"Write on my soul
Write me poetry of my own
Without being written or engraved
Precious scripture
Enchanted with love
Blowing so gently in a breeze"

Very rhythmic and like a gentle breeze.

Thanks for dropping by my blog and for your comment. Look forward to seeing you back!

7:21 AM  
Anonymous Lorena said...

great poem. very fluid "a tiny breeze of a soul"
very beautiful words :)

9:43 PM  
Blogger Faith said...

"I’m free to fly the galaxy skies "

I loved this poem Nasra ..

There's something about it that touched me! Maybe the spirit of the poem! :)

1:44 AM  
Blogger gulnaz said...

makes me imagine the desert sunsets, the skies and the breeze.

"Write on my soul
Write me poetry of my own"

"Colorless, I surrendered my race"

exquisite! you combine strength and loveliness in this one! :)

2:05 AM  
Blogger elkenarra said...

look like home!

8:39 AM  
Blogger Jeremy said...

Hey-Saw that you liked poetry so thought would invite you take a look at mine, would love to know what you think! Hope alls well, Jeremy http://www.jemidgimi.blogspot.com

P/s read through yours and thought was really cool!

10:24 AM  
Blogger Swati said...

A lovely poem. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem.

6:15 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Im so touched by the comments over here..never thought I will get someone to read my poem ...

8:05 AM  
Blogger Het Waghela said...

Thats good one. I am not a poet and from couple of my blogger frenz, i always wonder how people can combine words together, and make it a poem.

10:03 PM  
Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Definately you haven't lost it

9:51 AM  

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