Tuesday, July 05, 2005

Seen Your Star

This poem was inspired by ~ elkenarra ~
In fact Im so amazed during this year I have read many poetry blogs, each of these blogs had touched me so deeply and I hope my blog ~ L I P ~
will be able to do a bit of justice to their amazing poetic talent

I have seen your star
Twinkling towards me so far
Just wished that I could be so near
So my soul can be close and hear
All your poetic whispers
And I will be among the first listeners
Amazed by all the wonders
For I got to realize, you brings me tears and laughter
Upon these tangling emotions, nothing else I’m after


Copyright 2005 nasra al adawi

16 Comments:

Blogger Hopeless Poet said...

Finally I can see some rhymes :D
And it is beautifully written :)

And I would like to thank you for your continues support and promoting my work.

5:58 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Hopless Poet
Im amazed by myself that I wrote a poem with a rhymes. LOL

See now you know that I can do it.

In fact thank you for being one of inspiration star despite the distance that we are

7:36 PM  
Blogger Het Waghela said...

One more from ur poetic brain, Nasra.

2:17 AM  
Blogger Srikar said...

first time here. nice blog. You seem to be someone who appreciates photography. Do chk my photo-blog (//snaphots2097.blogspot.com)and tell me how you fell abt it.

Will sut=rely come back here.

8:13 AM  
Blogger Faith said...

Lovely.

I can relate to this poem..

Keep it up, Nasra.

10:48 AM  
Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

You write so beautifully

11:11 AM  
Blogger Het Waghela said...

Sorry Nasra,
I was reading yesterday's comment, after reading my comment I felt I wrote something wrong or which may not be true.
Its not from ur poetic brain but poetic heart as poets' lines comes from their heart right?

9:23 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Het Waghela
Maybe it can be from both..Poetry is born from the heart but the mindof the poet does need to use her brain to put it togather

Sue
Im glad you liked it

Srikar
Yes I love photography, how did you know that?

Faith
Im glad t see you back

10:31 PM  
Blogger Lorena said...

beautiful. how sweet of you.

7:57 PM  
Blogger Het Waghela said...

Thats right, its combination of both mind and heart.

10:07 PM  
Blogger Bluesky_Liz said...

I like your works too, Nasra. :-)

3:47 AM  
Blogger sidrah said...

beautiful!

elkenarra does stir the mostest out of people :)

well done!

5:22 AM  
Blogger . : A : . said...

"Upon these tangling emotions, nothing else I’m after"

That is pure emotion. Nice closing.

7:38 AM  
Blogger elkenarra said...

Call me Dolores!!
Like they do in the stories!!

3:17 AM  
Blogger stella said...

your writing resonates with me ;)
so glad to have found your poems...

1:23 PM  
Blogger Misreflection said...

I love the concept behind this poem, its so truly romantic, seen your star.. all your poetic whispers.. nothing else I'm after. beautiful.. Life is really about simplicity and using what nature has provided, the link to the wonders of the universe ie stars to people is just so awesome..

3:01 PM  

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