Saturday, July 02, 2005

Brave Soul

Now the time has come for me
To let the truth out
Beginning with self confession
For this soul of mine want to utter the truth
Only a brave soul can take this step
To come upfront and admit its faults
I�m only at foe with myself
Here is the moment of truce
On my final journey in finding peace
I surrender my dagger for my search is over now
The kingdom was not a lost city
It was lost soul- my soul
The mockery of time kept watching me staggering into my own chaos
Sizzling into anger and unbearable confusion
Scorching into my lost
How easy to heed to the silence of temptation
Many hearts will add music of villainous
Scoping me away from the righteous path
Temptation is addiction of oneself
Shows love but hides a dark side
True I have been thrown into a dilemma
Yet many helpful hearts refused to let me sink
They reached out of me, snatching me from drowning
When only I wanted to be forgotten
Like a lost city in our logical mind it does not exist
I waned to be a legendary remaining a tale of once upon a time
My heart was aging entering into its fatality
It was by my own hands shredding my life
The resistance of this soul was true fighter,
Dipping me out from ruins of death
Gasping to take a breath of life
Inhaling insanity into my mind
I finally woken up from fatal trance
An empowered soul ready to shield from any living turmoil
Only a brave soul can take this step


7 Comments:

Blogger Cold Cut Ten said...

I can relate to this. To be down for so long to realise that the one who is keeping me down is me. Losing one's soul for a while and sabotaging oneself while blaming others constantly. To wallow in self pity and be unable to get up, just want to wish oneself away. A brave soul indeed to wake up and realise this, and to move forward.

3:25 AM  
Blogger Hopeless Poet said...

I don't know why it is hard for me to comment on your poems! But I just wanna say that I read them even if I didn't comment :D

And it seems that you were doing some soul searching and that you have succeeded.
I hope I was one of those helpful hearts that refused to let you sink ;)

1:01 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Liz
Its true sometime a person keep holding them selves down...I do that to me too. One thing I do not give up I feel down but I never give up...

5:51 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Well Hopeless Poet
Indeed you had inspired me wyou knowing...

Thank you so much far taking the time to read my work

6:09 AM  
Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Its so true the love of those around us stop us drowning. I love these lines

True I have been thrown into a dilemma
Yet many helpful hearts refused to let me sink
They reached out of me, snatching me from drowning
When only I wanted to be forgotten

9:48 AM  
Blogger Lorena said...

wow, this is so empowering. what wonderful writing!!! we witness you coming into your own, taking control of your life from someone who would rather sink to someone stepping into a brave soul.
iamnasra this was great!

9:49 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Sue
I agree with you the remedy of hearting its a dose of love in our life

Lorena
Thank you and Im glad it touched you.

1:08 AM  

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