Monday, September 17, 2007

~Only Tears Fall~


Nature's Tears 2
Originally uploaded by metalmonkey1313



"A journey of relief
Begins with tears"


Liquid pearls
Droplet tears
On a leaf of soul
Gently falling
The surface can't hold
Intensity of pain
Smoothing the journey
For every tear to fall

Copyright 2007 Nasra Al Adawi



"Heaven knows we need never be ashamed of our tears,
for they are rain upon the blinding dust of Earth,
overlaying our hard hearts." Charles Dickens

Many thanks to the photo taken by Metalmonkey1313 at flickr.com


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15 Comments:

Anonymous Brian said...

Beautiful.

1:05 PM  
Blogger ann said...

brian sent me here...

your writing is exquisite

2:01 PM  
Blogger Azer Mantessa said...

nice prose ... tq :-)

5:28 PM  
Blogger Nicholas said...

This is the best...
liquit pearls droplet tears on a leaf of soul..
The best nature's tears with your magical words.
Thank you!

1:40 PM  
Blogger Janice Thomson said...

"A journey of relief
Begins with tears" - oh how true Nasra...love these words of yours...hope you are well.

3:10 PM  
Blogger Kuan Gung said...

Beautiful...thank you

7:37 PM  
Blogger Paul said...

Nice, and true.

When pain doesn't end and progresses over years then over a decade, a different reality unfolds - at least it did for me. (I don't know anyone else in a similar situation.)

You stop crying. You don't repress or try not to. The tears just don't happen anymore.

I've concluded from this that crying, at its essence, expresses that you're in trouble - a signal that you need help. When it finally sinks in that no help is coming, the tears themselves understand their pointlessness and stop.

7:09 AM  
Blogger priya said...

Tears always reappear when the thought bounce back. But for that moments, tears can bring a good feeling of relief by expressing it in our own way. Tears for joy and pain only matters in mind, but the pain never goes coz it stays forever in the heart.

7:41 AM  
Blogger Lyrically speaking said...

I didn't even know about this blog, glad you mentioned it to me. Thanks so much, i'll be stopping by more often. Love the poem.

8:09 AM  
Blogger krystyna said...

Beautiful...
with lovely soul ... as you are Nasra!

1:07 PM  
Blogger magiceye said...

heart wrenchingly beautiful

8:02 AM  
Blogger floots said...

giyjwell said
yes - smoothing the journey indeed
thank you

5:34 AM  
Blogger Don Iannone said...

Beautifully done, Nasra. Howa re things with you? Well I hope.

4:20 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

Tears are so vital, your words here are very true

1:40 AM  
Blogger eric1313 said...

Very strong.

I see many of my friends have known of your work for a while!

peace out, Nasra. Your work is powerful.

9:26 PM  

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