A Stray Heart
Well I had great time working with Hopeless Poet, When ever I chat with him I get inspired to write a poem. A part from the poem here, here is couple more of my poetry inspired by him Angelic flower
Sinking with Secrets .
He finally agreed to be interviewed by me, and I’m happy that I was able to put it together in my blog~ L I P ~
:Special thanks to Hopeless Poet:
A Stray Heart
I heard the flowers whispering
Gently withering
Releasing a secret meant only for me
Softly reciting your name
I hear it with the singing of the breeze
The truth affirmed with the dancing of the trees
My heart was trembling beyond the sage
And if the sky was not a transparent page
I would have seen the declaration clearly written over the sky
How was I blinded from the truth and my heart stood so shy?
I was just few steps away
Living a world of my own but my heart is a stray
I was too blind for your love meant to be mine
Too late, in my own chaos I’m lagging behind
Copyright 2005, nasra al adawi
posted by iamnasra at 1:18 PM
14 Comments:
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beautiful. the imagery and your oneness with nature is amazing.
so many times we are blind. you really painted a pretty picture :)
Well. it was based from a poem I read of Hopeless Poet..he had great blend of nature that I got inspired by him and it was like answering him
Breathtakingly beautiful 'how I was blinded from the truth and my heart stood so shy
'how I was blinded from the truth and my heart stood so shy'
so beautiful and so real!!!
Wow! a truly beautiful piece of work..
I am so flattered :D
It never occurred to me that I will be a source of inspiration for such a nice poem like this!! Maybe the best one I read for you so far!
that was a nice poem.
Sue
Gulnaz
Misreflection
Hugs from me and Im glad you liked my poem
Hopeless Poet
Here you go mr isnpiration, and you never knew you had it in you
The Poet
Thank you for visiting my blog
Love the way you ended this. I am also getting lost in the iris:)
very beautiful. i felt as if i were swaying with your words. what a lovely poem!
Beautiful mashallah..
"How was I blinded from the truth and my heart stood so shy?"
I think this one is your best.. amazing!
Mermaid
Nice seeing in my blog...Im glad you liked my poem
Stella
Wellcome in my humble blog...
Faith
Hopeless poet always wanted me to write in Rhyme ...But I never thoguht its in me..I wanted to be like a wind running so free in the wild..and thathow I felt about Rhyme its an obsticale through my journey
beautiful images here, and the message... that tugs at my heart strings too : -)
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