Friday, July 08, 2005

A Stray Heart

Well I had great time working with Hopeless Poet, When ever I chat with him I get inspired to write a poem. A part from the poem here, here is couple more of my poetry inspired by him Angelic flower
Sinking with Secrets .
He finally agreed to be interviewed by me, and I’m happy that I was able to put it together in my blog~ L I P ~

:Special thanks to Hopeless Poet:

A Stray Heart

I heard the flowers whispering
Gently withering
Releasing a secret meant only for me
Softly reciting your name
I hear it with the singing of the breeze
The truth affirmed with the dancing of the trees
My heart was trembling beyond the sage
And if the sky was not a transparent page
I would have seen the declaration clearly written over the sky
How was I blinded from the truth and my heart stood so shy?
I was just few steps away
Living a world of my own but my heart is a stray
I was too blind for your love meant to be mine
Too late, in my own chaos I’m lagging behind

Copyright 2005, nasra al adawi


Blogger Lorena said...

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3:21 PM  
Blogger Lorena said...

beautiful. the imagery and your oneness with nature is amazing.
so many times we are blind. you really painted a pretty picture :)

3:23 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Well. it was based from a poem I read of Hopeless Poet..he had great blend of nature that I got inspired by him and it was like answering him

7:59 PM  
Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Breathtakingly beautiful 'how I was blinded from the truth and my heart stood so shy

12:18 AM  
Blogger gulnaz said...

'how I was blinded from the truth and my heart stood so shy'

so beautiful and so real!!!

6:59 AM  
Blogger Misreflection said...

Wow! a truly beautiful piece of work..

12:38 PM  
Blogger Hopeless Poet said...

I am so flattered :D
It never occurred to me that I will be a source of inspiration for such a nice poem like this!! Maybe the best one I read for you so far!

12:44 PM  
Blogger thepoet said...

that was a nice poem.

10:16 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Hugs from me and Im glad you liked my poem

Hopeless Poet
Here you go mr isnpiration, and you never knew you had it in you

The Poet
Thank you for visiting my blog

4:25 AM  
Blogger mermaid said...

Love the way you ended this. I am also getting lost in the iris:)

9:31 AM  
Blogger stella said...

very beautiful. i felt as if i were swaying with your words. what a lovely poem!

12:41 PM  
Blogger Faith said...

Beautiful mashallah..

"How was I blinded from the truth and my heart stood so shy?"

I think this one is your best.. amazing!

2:59 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Nice seeing in my blog...Im glad you liked my poem

Wellcome in my humble blog...

Hopeless poet always wanted me to write in Rhyme ...But I never thoguht its in me..I wanted to be like a wind running so free in the wild..and thathow I felt about Rhyme its an obsticale through my journey

12:32 PM  
Blogger Misreflection said...

beautiful images here, and the message... that tugs at my heart strings too : -)

2:45 PM  

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