Countless Glitters of Stars
I took one read into the poetry of Daniel Josph XhHow to Light a Fire and Disappear Completely and I was touched by the way he wrote. Please read his poem Im sure it will touch you as the way it touched me in a way that it made me write this poem here.
O. Love
Come back to me
Once again
Remind me how to light
Countless glitters
Into this darkness
Painting this earthly space
In glitters of stars
I flame so far away
I flame so kindly
Yet my voice is million years
Distant from you
Watch me, twinkling in every star
Know that lovingly, I’m reaching out for you
I know from that corner of earth
You stand watching- the far away galaxies
There I am catching the never ending glimpse of you
Gratified for the moment that seems to last me forever
Into my wondering soul
copyright 2005, nasra al adawi
Come back to me
Once again
Remind me how to light
Countless glitters
Into this darkness
Painting this earthly space
In glitters of stars
I flame so far away
I flame so kindly
Yet my voice is million years
Distant from you
Watch me, twinkling in every star
Know that lovingly, I’m reaching out for you
I know from that corner of earth
You stand watching- the far away galaxies
There I am catching the never ending glimpse of you
Gratified for the moment that seems to last me forever
Into my wondering soul
copyright 2005, nasra al adawi
posted by iamnasra at 8:48 AM
14 Comments:
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That is nice. I guess many people have had that kind of feeling - that somehow we identify our own being with the being of all things.
Its a lovely poem. I visited your other bog: LIP. Awesome effort you have put in there to find and appreciate amateur poets.
very romantic poem nasra. especially like these lines
"Remind me how to light
Countless glitters
Into this darkness
Painting this earthly space
In glitters of stars"
it speaks of a soul mate to me. i will definitely read the poetry of Xhan. thanks for sharing that.
an inspiration lights an inspiration. this is poetry indeed...
your poem is beautiful! i loved the part, "Yet my voice is million years
Distant from you
Watch me, twinkling in every star
Know that lovingly, I’m reaching out for you"
will read his poem too, i'm sure it must be good! :)
Very beautiful nasra.
To imagine the void you describe and the distances required to cross it make me wonder how we ever find the person who completes us. Realization of that is a miracle in and of itself. It really is a tribute to all those who have found such love.
By the way, you can acivate the word verification under the comments section of your template to cut down on the spambots - these spammers have a program that looks up key words and then link to your site autoomatically - that's what some of these anonymous blogger posts such as the first two have done in this thread - if you use the word verification, the spam bots cannot 'read' and therefore cannot post on your thread - this feature keeps the anonymous spam-bot programmers from cluttering up your site with inappropriate or off-topic posts aimed at advertising their sites on your blog. It's just a suggestion.
Paul
You are right we tend to want merge someone else as result of it we tend to not know who we are
Black Tulip
Thank you for taking the time to read my blog...As for the LIP Im a bit slow on updating it
Lorena
hope u got my e-mail and I would like to find a soul mate..In which country are they hiding ..LOL
feminine expressions
The Voice
Thank you for both of you teaching me to put the verification on ..hope it will wrok
Marcus Harris
There was love in the air when i wrote it..Know I look at the poem and I think how did I think of it
Gulnaz
lots of hugs from me...Im glad you liked it...His poem is really touching other wise i would not come out with such poem
Very nice expression. You have a knack to take off from where others stop.
:-)
ur poem is really touching....
"Watch me........wondering soul"...
excellent....keep it up...
"Painting this earthly space
In glitters of stars
I flame so far away"
wow. great words here.
keep on writing poems and enjoy your art!
and thanks for visiting my blog!
Your poem makes wonderful reading..I love the way you have written -" Remind me how to light
Countless glitters Into this darkness Painting this earthly space In glitters of stars
I flame so far away I flame so kindly..."beautifully expressed and the words simple yet powerful!
have sent you an email about LIP, please check and let me know. :)
ahhhhh ... this is so sweet Nasra. Every time I read it I am lost for words.
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