To Remember You
Full moon tonightI want to remember it, through your eyes
Inspirable night
Arising my inner tide
I want to erase any droplet of pain
Allowing only happy memories to remain
I want to remember you in kind
Just to know that you touched my soul, it’s an endless gain
Carrying this memory in my after life ride
I want to remember you with nothing else, except with love
copyright 2005, nasra al adawi
copyright 2005, nasra al adawi
Sometime we let go of those might be a friend or even part of family in spare of anger or hurt. Should we go through hard choices? Let us not revolve on the point that they had hurt us.. Let us give a room for forgiveness. If it’s hard to forgive then remember them at least with good memory.
posted by iamnasra at 3:05 PM
15 Comments:
Lovely lines,
"Inspirable night
Arising my inner tide
I want to erase any droplet of pain
Allowing only happy memories to remain"
arising m y inner tide --- wonderful choice of words...
Iamnasra, thank-you for your lovely words, It's lovely that you like to re-read them, I often find your comments scattered about and your opinion is greatly valued
Full moon tonight
I want to remember it, through your eyes
Inspirable night
Arising my inner tide
beautiful lines!!
its not easy to let go of hurt but you have got to do it, for yourself, most of all. sometimes it even seems ridiculous to hold grudges for many years. there are some people i know who nurse their grudges into big cactii.
A
Im glad you like my poem
Nicole
Its great to se you in my blog
Sue
I have this style of going through past posts LOL
Gulnaz
You are right at times its hard to let of grudges
How very lovely!
Thanks for dropping by my blog, Nasra.
very wise words.
"Carrying this memory in my after life ride"
beautiful words and poem!
you are right, forgiveness is important for both people involved.
iamnasra,
such a sweet poem. you have a gentle touch in your writing... ;)
After reading this, I should be complimenting YOU.
Its truly takes a "big" person to remember only the good, an angel in fact. :)
very beautiful.
'arising my innter tide'.
i love that.
Mashairi
Its nice to see you in my blog and Im glad you liked my poem
Lorena
Big hug from me
Stella
I never thought I had a gentle touch and this coming from you Im honored
Free Spirirt
Wellcome to my blog
Misreflection
You are right not all of us can be so forgiving...
DeeM
Glad to see you in my blog
Gentle, loving, with that little burn of salt on wounds that are almost healed. This lovely poem aspires to a giving of kindness. Enjoyed your blog and will be back! Thanks for visiting my blog.
Thank you **very much***for your many compliments & inspiring feedback on my poetry and my artwork!. I dearly wish we lived near each other for a writer's group. I feel a kinship and will email you very soon! I"d love to share more writing and art with you.
Your poem is soothing and radiates the beauty of your words. LIke another commenter, I especially like the phrase "inspirable night /arising my inner tide". The entire poem flows in word choice and feeling. It also shows a person I'd like to meet. :)
Meanwhile, I"m sorry I haven't dropped in. I'm finishing up a collage painting, based on my current poem & a similar painting.
I'll be donating that, as one of 14 artists honored to have been chosen. The artworks will be rafffled off to raise $ for a huge new Community Arts Center: art of all types: visual, performing (music, dance, theatre), book and poetry readings, signings, and more! :) Maybe I'll summon the courage to submit poetry there besides my artwork.... If they take showings from around the world, I'll be emailing you about that..
(Also thx for the recent dropping in to say hello. That made my evening. I'm about to spend alone time w/ my husband, a rarity with 2 kids!) Take care- I'll be back to read here later in the wk!
That was me above. I forgot to put my URL - Sorry the comment becamse so long. I type fast & should have put it in email. SilverMoon
Http://SilkenThreads18.blog.com
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