Simply Happy
Emerald Ocean
So ever green
It touches
Every fiber of my emotion
I just feel it
Tides of waves
Running back and forth
Playing many strings of tunes
Lifting me up
To the ocean of clouds
Fluffy clouds floating on the sky
I'm living, dreaming and lingering
To this unrealistic images
Just breathing the breeze
Melting into these pictures of what my soul had painted
I'm simply being happy
Copyright 2005 nasra al adawi
So ever green
It touches
Every fiber of my emotion
I just feel it
Tides of waves
Running back and forth
Playing many strings of tunes
Lifting me up
To the ocean of clouds
Fluffy clouds floating on the sky
I'm living, dreaming and lingering
To this unrealistic images
Just breathing the breeze
Melting into these pictures of what my soul had painted
I'm simply being happy
Copyright 2005 nasra al adawi
posted by iamnasra at 1:44 PM
15 Comments:
your words bring the touch of your happiness into the reader and we float with you...
I love going to the beach and looking out to the ocean. And smelling it - that salty smell. Cheers me up when I'm feeling down.
excellent picture!
i love the floating feeling of joy in this poem, its lovely. :)
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Happy poet
your simple words
lift me up
when they are heard
Gentle spirit
your sky becomes mine
your ocean
so so green
feels like a satin, shining scene
Thank you for
where your mind roams
Thank you for
bring gifts
when you come home.
smiles
Liz
i could imagine every bit of it,like i was not reading it but living it.
happiness is the colour on the blacks and whites of life...enjoy
another great poem Nasra...made me speechless...
Simply being happy beautifully I love the idea of melting a picture your soul drew
what a beautiful description of this feeling,
"Playing many strings of tunes
Lifting me up
To the ocean of clouds"
wonderful imagery!!
and that color is very uplifting. i love all shades of blue.
I esp liked 'I'm simply being happy'....It is actually very simple to be happy...one just has to let go of the complexities....
simply uplifting and inspiring nasra
I enjoy reading your strong uplifiting poetry. This is a superb photo image to accompany your poem. This reminds me of my favorite place to vacation, a place I only went to once in the ocean called "Emerald Isle."
N, thank you for caring to check up on me. It brightened my night to see your posts. :) I was out of blogland for that month for many reasons.
Nasra,
Great image in your piece. I can almost float there with you!
Nice rhyme - the ocean touching the fibres of emotion.
Happiness is such a simple, complete emotion and you bring out the point strongly in this poem.
I did not expect that this poem can touch all of you who read...simple reason I rarely express about my happiness in poetry...Thank you so much for your comments
Silly Adventure
Of course you can hang it over there...I worte a poem and I have been checking on you if your are back...my prayers to you...Inshallah urudi salama ...that says Hope you return safely
Liz
The beach allow me to forget who am I...I become a blank page..all my faults are ereased..
Liz ME Strauss
Im so honored to get a your lovely poem...hugs from me
Sue
You are back..how is your timeoff with your Mum ..hope all went as expected
Rusty
Glad you are back
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